Sounds good! I think you should go into greater detail, so that the reader would be more able to connect to the characters.The names are alittle odd for wolves. I don't know if you want to change them, but if you made them more nature-ish, I think it would seem more realistic. For example, Star and Chase are good names, but Alison really isn't, not for a wolf. Try something like Grey, or Shadow, or Night, or Hunter, or Silver, or something like that. Otherwise, it sounds good!
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